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可以幫我挑一下錯誤嗎(英文問題)
Jul 15th 2013, 12:05

小弟想寫張明信片給國外發生槍擊案的小朋友,有什麼地方可以修改的嗎?

 小弟弟寫關懷信給小朋友 真乖乖 但是這種事件要避免使用深奧的字語以免小乖乖小朋友 看不懂 是相當困難的

 It makes me so sad to hear the news of your incidence and I would like to let you know everyone here cares about your situation.  May trust and love remain with you for they are important to every happy life.

 若是寫給老師的 可以用難字的:  

 My heart has been with you all since the incident and everyone here would also like to send you their condolences.  We all are deeply concerned about the issue and your situations.  May trust and love be with you all for they are the foundation of happy lives.

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